Friendship is one of the most beautiful things in our life. She means to me my sister, my neighbor, and my best friend. Her name is Abeer. She always I find her around me even if she has busy life. We had a wonderful childhood together. The first time I met her when I was five years old. I was playing with her every afternoon and I spent a wonderful time with her. sometimes we had stupid days, happy days, sad days, and wonderful days. I wish the god (allah) protect Abeer everywhere and makes her happy always. I feel happy with her and our relationship still strongly until now and I hope to extend all the life. One of my best memory with her before two years it was raining and we played under the rain when we came back from school. Friendship is beautiful meaning effect as clearly. Also, it is difficult to find good friends.
Well written. Only one error, a missing verb. Can you find it? Current grade=90%
ReplyDeleteour relationship is still strong is where the error was.
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