National day

Each years we have been celebration for this event . This kinds of event is different from any other one . And it makes nation feel more responsible about it , because it talks about their life and future and identity . It's national day for UAE that happen in 2ed of December . And all people from UAE or lives in UAE feeling happy for this celebrate . On the other hand , each person have own idea to celebrate . But they all be in law and don't do any things wrong in this event , because it's his responsibility to be in safety side . Also some people talk about his feeling by decorate his car . But some people they're trying to be unique be decorate their home by different way . The celebration in UAE is different in each years and this celebration is became deeper and bigger , because we are now know what the national day mean to us .  

 

Mobile phones

Millions of people own mobile phones these days. As mobile phones become more popular you rarely would see or hear some is without a phone . Nowadays majority of people can afford buying a mobile phone. The reasons why we dependent so much on mobile phones, firstly, because using mobile phones is useful, we can carry the phone everywhere we go. Therefore,it's practical. We can keep in contact with others at anytime. For example, we can phone call for help in time of an emergency. If a person has had an accident, they will call the police for help. On the other hand, there are disadvantages of using mobile phone. Even though mobile phones are easy to carry but still it's easy to lose it because of it's size. In addition,  mobile phones can cause many problems. Scientific research said that mobile phones has radioactive waves that can cause cancer and cause damage to the ears. For instance, many people especially teenagers would carry their phones with them to bed and then suddenly fall a sleep while the phone is active and laying right next to them, which later on affects the brain nerves by the radioactive waves and causes sever problems. In conclusion, we all agree that nowadays mobile phones are very important and we can't live without it, but in the same time we shouldn't see the cup half full, where is good there is bad, so people should be aware to side affects of mobile phones.  

I have busy days at university. First, I wake up at 5:30 to pray. Then, I return to sleep till 7:00. When I wake up I get dressed for the university. Second, I go to the university. The time from my home to the university is about 15 minutes. The first thing I do at university is eat breakfast with my friends if I am not late. If I late I go to the class quickly. The time of the class is two hours, so I feel bored because the class is too long. Also, my break is about two hours. It's very long, but it passes quickly. At the break I meet my friends, talk with each other and eat the lunch. Sometimes, I eat rice or pasta, and sometimes I eat sandwich. Moreover, if anyone have a homework or exam we help each other to study. When we don't have any homework or exams we make something make us enjoy. For example, go to the gym and dance. After the break I have anther class. Third, when I finish my all classes, I see my friends, and say goodbye. Finally, I return home, and I feel so tired. I take a nap. After that, I start to study, sit with my family, and eat dinner with them. At 1:00 I go to a deep sleep and all my days that this routine.

Poor children

The number of poor countries are growing every year because natural disaster, wars and revolutions. Also, poverty has some devastating effects and it negatively affects children more than any other category. In fact, poor children are two times more likely than non poor children to have stunted growth, iron deficiency, and severe asthma. Furthermore, the number of child labour is increasing in these countries and there are a lot of poor children don't go to schools to learn because their parents don't have good budget to enrolled their children at schools. Although, of their age, some poor children have a hard works so they work just to provide a basic needs for their families such as food and clothing. However, we should help the poor children to live as other children and  they most live their childhood without cruelty, violence and suffering. Moreover, There are many solutions to help the poor children. First of all, you can choose what you are going to be able to give them. For example, you can donate your knowledge and teaching poor children, you can donate your old clothes, and you can donate anything you have not only money. Secondly, we can solve this problem with a community. For instance, we should rise awareness people about this endemic problem. In addition, we should provide the education for poor children. Overall, If we work together, we can solve any problem that faces us because the problem isn't  in sentiment but in the timing and method of expression.

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The error : Although 

My favorite country

I will write about a beautiful country. It has many topic to write about it. It is my favorite country. Ti is Japanese country. Japanese people they write Japan like this 日本 they reading in  Japan or the say Nihon. Japan has a beautiful meaning the meaning of Japan it is ( source of the sun or sun origin) because is an island nation in East Asia. Firstly, I will talk about located in the Pacific Ocean it is lies to the east of the Sea of Japan. The capital of the Japan is Tokyo and it is a largest city. Secondly, Japan has many official languages like Aynuitak,Ryukyan languages,Eastern Japanese,Western Japanese several other Japanese dialects. When we sea people from Japan we call them Japanese. Finally, I shoes this topic because Japanese people are very smart and they are very seriously at work. All as all,it is my favorite country because it is a beautiful and a contemporary country.

Health foods

The health foods are kind of all  food natural . In our life there are many kinds of food but we are agree that the healthy food  keep our life more healthier .  First of all, the advantages of healthy food,it's affect of the body. For example, when you eat several fruits and vegetables every day, your body can takes enough of vitamins. Also, it helps babies to grow. Really your body came strong. Secondly, the healthy food protect us from the dangerous diseases such as, cancers, heart diseases and some infections diseases. Thirdly the healthy food makes us to think positively because all healthy food are natural, and Fourthly, healthy food is good way to stay along life, so we should keep ourselves safety.

Last weekend

 Last weekend I spent a wonderful time with my lovely friends at the beach. It was such an amazing day with lovely activity. Such as, wolking along the beach, did BBQ, and running rice. Becuse of the effort I felt I lost a kilo. It was really a funny day with many adventures. When the sun started setting we set near the beach and looking to the sky. It was a very comfortable felt. After ward, we went to marrena mall to took a cup of coffe and relaxed.however, I felt very tierd and sleepy they wanted shopping. I apologized and rode the car to home. When I back to home I was a happy and very tierd. After that I spent one hour with my parents took and ate our dinner.finaly, I went to took a shower and wrote a small summary about our trip and went to bed.

- adventures

- parents 

Week 3

Write 150 words on any topic, but you must use at least 7 different connectors apart from and/but/because and for example. You will be assessed on how well you have used these connectors.

Why some people aren't educate!

There are many people who aren't educated in this world. Those people have a different reasons which stop them to learn. Some of those people live in poor country . More over, this country need a lot of help not just for education . For example, Somalia is a poor country in Africa . Somalia doesn't have any material support . They don't have school, teacher, money and many things ales. However, some if people can learn and have a lot of care in their country but they are fools . They don't want to study  they prefer dependent on others. In addition, there are people want to learn but the school far way from their town so it is hard for them to go for the school daily . Further more, some country their students have to pay money to learn and they are poor so they work in early age. All in all, these are some reason but I think there are more and more . 

*The  error are : a  - reason 

The correct are :  without (a) - reasons 

       

People isn't able to go to university

Today many people in the word face many difficult hurdles that they must get over to be successful. One problem that young people face isn't being able to go to university. Some cause to this problem are people don't have enough money to compleat their education, people live far away from university and people don't have enough time because they have children. Although there are causes for this problem there are some solutions and I'll explain it. First, For the reason that people don't have enough money to continue there studying government should create special fund programs that provide financial aid for people who are successful at high school so they can give them scholarship. Secondly,For the second reason which is people live far away university. I think  the government have to supply them by technology so they can see the instructor teach them by using theology online.Finally the last reason is that people don't have time because they have children to care about them so I think people should put  their children in KG or put them in member of family and pick them later after they finish duty.

Pollution

There are many problems facing the earth, some of this problem are water, air and land pollution .first of all, water pollute by industrials ships,humane wast so it's affect in human bodies which cause dangerous disease like malaria. Secondly, air pollute by traffic and gas rose from industry moreover, cutting trees can cause die because of the co(2) when trees burning.finally land pollution causes by people throw their garbage on the routs or garden so it's distorts the overall views of the country. I think the government should but strict role for people who's made corruption like fines also they must aware people to concern about environment.

Happy weekend

                                                  Happy weekend 

On Thursday I slept very early  because I was very tired.

Last week my son had an operation so, I didn't sleep well. Because of

that ,thursday was sleep day. However, friday was active day. I woke up

at 6:00. Then, we went to Dubai at 10:00 with my small family. The

weather was gorgeous .  We spent wonderful time together. We went to

emirate's mall and we played at the game city . It was great time. After

that, we had the lunch at cheese cake  factory. The food was so delicious

and tasty. Furthermore, we enjoyed the weather in al mamzer beach. It was

rainy and cloudy. Saturday was BBQ day. The brothers's and sisters's of

my husband came to visit  us and had the lunch with us. We ate together

and we chatted . We had nice time. But there is no time for study. Next

week I have to find time to study.

My best friend

I have a best friend. Her name is Maryam, but I call her Maryoom. I have known Maryam for 7 years. The first time I met her was at school in grade 8 and she was in my class. However, the first time I met her, I was hate her and she was hate me too. My friend Maryam and I are in a same age. She born in 19th of March but I born in 12th February. Maryam is very  talented. She draws very well and I like her paintings. Furthermore, she is interested in Japanese culture and she wants to travel there. In addition, she can speak Japanese language but now she wants to learn Russian language. However, I want to learn French language I just have learned a few French words.  My best friend Maryam lives in Abu Dhabi. Also, she is a student at Zayed university. She likes reading novels and watches movies. She is very close to me and I love her because she is honest, polite and cultured. She told me today Mr Robert did for her the speaking IELTS exam last year and she got a high score in IELTS. I hope to be her friend for ever.

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-  I think The error is : However, I want to learn French language I just have learned a few French words.

- The correct is : However, I want to learn French language and I just have learned a few French words.

Cornich

Cornish Abudabi is one of the most popular places in Abudabi. However, There you can see some restaurants and coffee shops. Also the air is wonderful and clean when you walk along the sea, but usually there are many people there. Last weekend I went there to meet my friend , but she didn't came. However I spent the time alone I walked along the sea and just looked at people movements I saw sad people and funny people who made me laughed. Furthermore I met someone for one hour and five minutes we talked and walked together then every one just went away without taking numbers or any thing to connect. Additionally, That make me little bit  sad but maybe in future we will meet suddenly. Although restaurants there have bad serves, but there food so delicious and hot, but the orders take time to be prepared. 

To sum up, Cornish Abudabi is the best place for me also for many people it have place to eat or drink or set. However I recommend to you to not go to Cornish in Friday because it to  crowed and noisy.    

  

Obesity

Obesity 

Obesity is one of the dangerous diseases that spread fast around the world , there are many factors that lead to this dangerous deceases such us , bad eating habit and being an active .

Dieting and physical exercise are the mainstays of treatment for obesity. Diet quality can be improved by reducing the consumption of energy-dense foods such as those high in fat and sugars also eating fast and junk foods instead of healthy food that will affect on your health badly , because these foods are high calories and Contains oil and bad things for your health . So we should be very Carful and to change the bad eating habit to good . Therefor being active  by doing sports and exercise such us , swimming , raining , dancing ext .....  May avoid us to suffer from obesity . Obesity is very dangerous disease it's lead to other dangerous diseases such us diabetes , blood pressure and high cholesterol. 

Junk food

There are many reasons why people like junk food ? people now on this days changed from before. They were eating healthy traditional food, but now is the opposite. First of all, people like junk food this days because they think that It's good taste and delicious. For example, they love extra thing in the meal like sugar, salt, mayonnaise and more extra things. Also, the children like it because restaurant put for them in the meal some gift games and some lovely things. Secondly, the traditional food it's healthy it has light things and have vitamins and breton. For example our traditional '' hares ,freed , rice and fish. Finally, to make children think about healthy food they should make one free day eat from out, make for them what they like fruits or vegetables. In addition, the both is delicious, but the traditional food is better because it healthy and less effectually. 

Thailand

Last year , I went with my family to Thailand . It was big country and had many natural place . Also you could fined all things you want to . In addition they had a good health service and all people knew about it . So this country had many foreigners from many country . when I was in Thailand I saw many companys in it for shoes and for jewelry , and I saw how they can made it . Moreover we went to many famous place in Thailand and had fun . But the important things for lady is sopping and sopping and sopping . Without this kind of things woman couldn't live . However the trip was very amazing and interesting because we learned a lot about their country and tradition . Also we faced them and met this kind people . And we're more interesting to going to Thailand again and meet our friend and had more fun in it .     

Smoking

Smoking is a dangerous habit. Smoking causes diseases and it damages the brain and lungs. This a big problem which leads to death. Nowadays, most people are addicted with smoking, especially teenager. Smoking causes different diseases such as cancer. However, smoking damages the brain and lungs. Our young generation teenager most of them are addicted with smoking because some of them follow other people or friends. People are not aware about the effects of smoking that leads them to die. Smoking also causes pollution. The cigarette smoke has a bad smell that when other people start smelling the bad air it affects the lungs and leads to shortness of breath. That is why people want to ban smoking in public places. The scientists statistics say that people breath the smoke affected more than when they smoke. So everyone must be more aware about the bad effects of smoking.  

Zodiac

Everyone knows that each of us has their own personality .. Well there are groups of people with similar personality , each group is called by a name and all of the groups are called zodiac signs . By the way I believe in the personality of zodiac signs because when I read about my zodiac sign which is scorpio I feel it talks about my personality and describe it, of corse not 100% of it true but most of it.

The most zodiac sign I like after my zodiac is libra. The people that are born in this month are know by the kindness of their heart ,balance in life ,fair ,worship a lot and they make amazing friends .

In our religion its haram to describe whether a person will be lucky or unlucky, however its accessible to highlight the main characteristics of people who wear born on each period of time.

Rain.

The winter season comes after the summer. Rain makes everyone feels happy. Winter is our best season because of the rain. Children come out and play in the rain water. We enjoy our time in the winter with our family and friends. If it is raining in the morning, we feels so happy because of the sounds of the rain. Also, we feels comfortable and excited in a rainy day. This weekend was an amazing week because the weather was nice and the rain makes me happy. A rainy day has a good effect on people. They always feels relax and it brings joyous mood. It's our best season because it is not common in our country and we don't see the rain a lot. So, people enjoy this season especially the children. This season is a gift from God. We should thank God for this great gift that he has given us. 

During this weekend I spent my time with my family we went to albdaayer to ride bikes to enjoy this awsome weather , thank god no one got hurt in this trip but we really enjoined ridding bikes . after that trip I went to my best friend's house cause I don't see her lately cause she's studying in sharks universty .we went shopping in marina mall we had fun there . And now ism planing to make little surprise for my two twins sisters cause it's their birthday tomorrow it can't imagen how did they grow up this fast . 

Week 2 blog post

Please write 150 words on a topic of your choice. The grammar assessed this time is punctuation - full stops, commas, apostrophes, run ons etc. You have till Sunday 2pm to post your words.
Good luck. 

Obesity

Nowadays most of people have obesity  because they don't lead healthy lifestyle. Also, UAE is the second country with diabetes it is  one of  reasons are people don't have any healthy lifestyle in their life. There are three main reasons  to agree with healthy lifestyle that leads to healthy body for several reasons. First, foods have affect to the body by give vitamins from the healthy food such as  vegetables  and fruits. Further more,  people must avoid eat unhealthy food like fast food. Second, healthy lifestyle lead to healthy body because they do a lot of exercise so sport will support body to be more strong and healthy. For example,  when they go to the  gym and clubs they will keep their bodies and minds by swimming and other sports.  Third, healthy lifestyle can help and treatment of many diseases. More over, there are a lot of diseases  could come from un healthy foods such as diabetes, stroke and obesity. Finally, I think these reasons are enough to agree with healthy lifestyle. Also, foods, exercise and disease are have many effect for the body so every person should have healthy lifestyle in his/her life.

Sheikha Fatima

Sheikha Fatima bint Mubarak Al ketbiy was married to his highness sheikh Zayed. She was born in Al Ain city as the only daughter to her parents.Sheikha Fatima is my best woman in The UAE. Sheikha Fatima is a wonderful woman in good deeds and education. She has many schools for adult education. Sheikha Fatima supports women in many ways for example in commercial projected education and she helps poor people and gives them a lot of help and money. I think Sheikha Fatima is the best women now because we do not see one cares about people. To sum up, Sheikha Fatima bint Mubarak  is a role models for me.

My weekends

After class on Thursday,I went to the mall with my uncle, I ate Mcdonals with my uncle, after the lunch I returned to home and took a nap for two hours. When I woke up, my mum told me after one hour we will go to the marina mall. I made shopping and I bought many clothes, shoes and bags. Then we went to the games section because my little sister and brothers wanted to play. They played many games and felt so happy. After that I went to Italian restaurant. I ate pasta for the dinner. On Friday I woke up early, took a shower and got ready because we had a family gathering in my grand father home. I went to grandpa home, I ate lunch with my big family. Then I go to the Dubai with my sisters and aunts. I bought dress because in the next month my aunt will marriage. Yesterday, I woke up at 12:00, I ate my breakfast, started to study and do my homework. I wrote a small paragraph about my weekend and I took photo for my room. Then, I go to the my grandma home because my grand mother was traveled and she back to UAE yesterday, so saw her and she gave us many gifts. Finally, after I finished all my work I went to my bed and I entered a deep sleep.         

Sport

Sport is good for our body it makes us more healthier and live longer. Because nowadays many of children and teenagers have bad habit is eating fast food that lead them to over weight. Obesity is a bad disease that lead our body to death, that why people must be more aware about having a healthy life style for themselves and their families. That now we are talking about sport let me tell you which sport I'm doing in my daily life. Is now a sport to me is my favorite sport is playing ice hockey, it's one of dangerous sports. Our club name is Abu Dhabi ice hockey team "STORMS". We are the first Emirates girls are playing ice hockey in the world and we are proud for ourselves. About two years and half we started to play ice hockey that in year 2011. Five tournaments we played out of the UAE, three of them in Hong Kong and two in Bangkok. That we won three times in first place and one in third place. Our levels of playing ice hockey is improving and we get many experiences from other players. We practice two days a week. All our families encourage us to play this kind of sport as it not opposed our religion and tradition. Playing ice hockey it become part of our lives , hockey let me meet a new people around the world and I became a social person. The last tournament was the best tournament ever because in this tournament we went only a local players. That we were fight for the first place and to be a champions. And another thing we did we show our coach, families and the world that young Emirates girls can also play this kind of sports "ICE HOCKEY" . We are one team, one family that has one goal to achieve. 

Wish us luck !

    

Eid vocation

Last Eid vocation , my father and mother decided to make special surprise for us , so they bought for all of us tickets to go to turkey , we were so happy about that in the other hand we were so worried how to spend the Eid vocation without the whole family such as my grandma's , my grandpa and aunts . So everyone went to his room to pack his bag with a smile on the face , in the next day we went to the airport and we were discussing with each other if we will have a nice Eid there . Since the aircraft approaching everybody were looking at the window to see the country from above it was amazing view from up there . After the plane landed we went to the emigration to stamp our passports we took the bus to the apartment which my dad has been received before we reach there . The next day of the vocation we started day by day going to the famous places in turkey such as bursa , the castle of sultan Suliman and too many other nice places , although we enjoyed our trip other hand we missed the traditional Eid in the UAE . As my father said there's no place like home . 

My favorite mall

Last Friday I went to Dubai mall which is my favorite mall. Dubai mall is the largest mall in the world. It has opened in forth November 2008. Furthermore, it has a lot of shops and restaurants. When I arrived to Dubai mall, I went to Bateel cafe. I ate there a delicious cake with coffee. Afterward, I went shopping and I bought many things. Then I saw the Dubai Aquarium which has more than 33,000 living animals. I saw a lot of tourists from Arabian Gulf, Europe, Asia, America and Africa. Then, I went to Kinokuniya bookstore. It has a lot of books in different languages. Also, I bought 3 English novels that will help me to improve my English language. Then I went to Texas restaurant to eat a dinner. Then I went to see a fountain dancer is very beautiful place. I enjoyed there and I think Dubai mall is the best shopping destination.

My first week in level 8 was so missy , day one there was no schedule until morning and it changes many time . I was checking the schedule every moment scared if it changes and the sir make me absent . These level I want to spent my time reading a lot of English story to improve my writing and speaking the most . Actually I need to practice a lot to success in my ITLES exam and get more than i imagine . I have small problems with my grammar so i have to work hard in this section because i don't want to worry about any thing . I must be confident on my self to prove my good language. Before the exam i must watch and learn about how the exam will be . There is a lot of of web sites or books to help , just google it and you will find what you want . 

Huge things

Each person have some thing in their mind . May be they think about or they throw it away and forget it . I don't know why ?! May be they are afraid to face it . So they running away from it , but it's still in their mind and they take more time to think about it . However , I think it can effect their life and takes them from their family and friend . It gives people bad attitude about your self that you unlike to meet any people . Because you're feel sadly and confused from some things . Which can change your life and put big impact in it . In addition you must be strong and trust your self that you can face all problem in your life . You must give up about those problem and don't be addicted from it . Because it's your life and you should and must lives it by best way.    

Shopping mall

I spend every weekend by shopping in the malls. It is one of my favorite hobbies. I like to shop in the malls because it makes me feel so happy and it always change my mood. Also, I always go when they open a new shopping mall in UAE. There are a lot of shopping malls in UAE but one of my best shopping mall is Al Wahda Mall because there is a good shops and restaurants. I am very interested in shopping, especially for clothes and shoes. Many people have this addiction because they have fun when they shop. We know that it's a bad addiction because we spend a lot of money when we have a shop, but we like it and we can't stop it. I think that building a new shopping mall near of our house was a very good idea because I might go every day not every weekend.

                                                                  My  Vacation

Last week I went to Turkey. They were amazing days. The most beautiful thing was the weather. It was cloudy,  rainy and cold.  There are many good places to see. As I never know that Turkey has hug archaeology. It has many old mosques at Istanbul. Bosporus port is a good place. You can walk and have traditional Turkish tea. Furthermore, there are some boats which sell fish sandwiches . Turkish food is delicious . There are a lot of  restaurants there. Shawarma and skander Khabab are the most famous food and they are very good. Also, I visited Bursa and Yallwa. I went there by the liner. They are not that much beautiful. However, the weather was chilly with little snow. I took many photos and I bought some gifts to my family. Remember that if you want to go to Turkey try to use the metro or tram to save your money.              

Last summer , I went to Germany with my family to visit my brother who is abroad to this country for studying . I had spending a really great time with my family there . We went to many gorgeous places such us Europe park , It's really wonderful place ,  it's a park which can you find every thing you like in it , I played electronic games with my sister  it was a really wonderful day , also i went to zalamsi which is amazing place it's really good for  relaxing , we rowed a small boat and there was a fight between me and my sister,  each one of us wanted to rowed the boat after all that she won of course because she is bigger than me and she rowed the boat. I really enjoyed spending my time with my family , but it was really sad to say goodbye for my brother and his family .    

Its the first week in level 8 after a week of holiday , I spent it on sleeping and watching TV. Honestly this week was horrible and exhausting , I can't get enough of feeling sleepy , lazy and don't wont to do anything , thats make my father mad at me in the morning and start shouting! you can say I tolerate with this situation. I like what I am doing and study in this level because it will develop my english language. Also training us to get high grades in ILETS. I will always try to improve my english language in order to succeed in my studies. In Zayed University, their english requirements are very high. One of the ways ill use to enhance my english is by reading books and watching english documentaries to improve specifically writing and listening skills. Its difficult to overcome my laziness, but ill always seek to be better and be a successful student. 

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Hi sir , I am Rahma Abdullah 

Hi sir, my name is Fatima Bakheet Alketbi.

Grammar to take care of for week 1

Please write 150 words on a topic of your choice. Be careful to use singular and plural nouns and pronouns correctly. Good luck!

Here's a link to help you understand what singular/plural problems can mean.

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Welcome

Hi all,
This blog is about improving your writing accuracy. Each week you will need to post 150 words on a topic that interests you.

Each week you will get a grade based on the number of errors you make in one grammar area. 

If you make 0 mistakes, you will get 100%. If you make 1 mistake, you will get 90%. If you make 2 mistakes, you will get 80%. If you make 3 mistakes, you will get 70%. If you make 4 mistakes, you get 60% and if you make 5 or more mistakes, you will get 50%. I will grade on Sunday 2-4pm, so your writing must be in by then.

Copied work, or work that I think isn't your own will get 0% (please don't get your sister to help!). Work under 150 words will lose 20%.

After I have graded the work, you have 1 day, till Monday 4pm, to find the mistakes. Each mistake you find and correct, will gain you 3%.

For example, if you wrote 150 words on a topic and I found 3 errors, you would get 70%. If by Monday 4pm, you found and fixed 2 of the errors, you'd get an extra 6%. This would make your score 76%.

You will do 5 of these pieces of writing and I will average the 4 best scores you get.

Please feel free to write about anything, add photos and video- just be careful to write correctly.

And if you ever feel like my son does in this picture, keep trying and don't give up!