Happy weekend
Happy weekend
On Thursday I slept very early because I was very tired.
Last week my son had an operation so, I didn't sleep well. Because of
that ,thursday was sleep day. However, friday was active day. I woke up
at 6:00. Then, we went to Dubai at 10:00 with my small family. The
weather was gorgeous . We spent wonderful time together. We went to
emirate's mall and we played at the game city . It was great time. After
that, we had the lunch at cheese cake factory. The food was so delicious
and tasty. Furthermore, we enjoyed the weather in al mamzer beach. It was
rainy and cloudy. Saturday was BBQ day. The brothers's and sisters's of
my husband came to visit us and had the lunch with us. We ate together
and we chatted . We had nice time. But there is no time for study. Next
week I have to find time to study.
Hi Noor, you have 2 capital letter errors and one comma you need to remove. Current grade 70%
ReplyDeleteyou found 2 errors- grade is now 76%
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