Poor children

The number of poor countries are growing every year because natural disaster, wars and revolutions. Also, poverty has some devastating effects and it negatively affects children more than any other category. In fact, poor children are two times more likely than non poor children to have stunted growth, iron deficiency, and severe asthma. Furthermore, the number of child labour is increasing in these countries and there are a lot of poor children don't go to schools to learn because their parents don't have good budget to enrolled their children at schools. Although, of their age, some poor children have a hard works so they work just to provide a basic needs for their families such as food and clothing. However, we should help the poor children to live as other children and  they most live their childhood without cruelty, violence and suffering. Moreover, There are many solutions to help the poor children. First of all, you can choose what you are going to be able to give them. For example, you can donate your knowledge and teaching poor children, you can donate your old clothes, and you can donate anything you have not only money. Secondly, we can solve this problem with a community. For instance, we should rise awareness people about this endemic problem. In addition, we should provide the education for poor children. Overall, If we work together, we can solve any problem that faces us because the problem isn't  in sentiment but in the timing and method of expression.

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