Saturday, November 23, 2013

Junk food

There are many reasons why people like junk food ? people now on this days changed from before. They were eating healthy traditional food, but now is the opposite. First of all, people like junk food this days because they think that It's good taste and delicious. For example, they love extra thing in the meal like sugar, salt, mayonnaise and more extra things. Also, the children like it because restaurant put for them in the meal some gift games and some lovely things. Secondly, the traditional food it's healthy it has light things and have vitamins and breton. For example our traditional '' hares ,freed , rice and fish. Finally, to make children think about healthy food they should make one free day eat from out, make for them what they like fruits or vegetables. In addition, the both is delicious, but the traditional food is better because it healthy and less effectually. 

2 comments:

  1. Hi Fatima, please write only from your mind for this exercise. There are 3 run ons and 1 capital letter error in this so that's 4 mistakes; grade is 60%. Try to find the mistakes.

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