Sunday, January 19, 2014

Best friend

I met too many people in my life since I was a child . It's really pleasure and honor to meet these people who  put imprint in my life . Some of them were good and others were not but both of them teach me a lesson which make me who I am today . When I start studying at zayed university I met too many girls in levels . One of them is my classmate student  her name is noor she is an amazing girl who has a sweat and kind heart. She is a mother for two children and she also a student at zayed university . I was always wanted to stop studying and stay at home because I felt so tired from studying , but when I met noor and many student like her , I saw the patient and the intend to finish and get the certification while they have many responsibility at home to do . She always tell me about how important the certification is in the life. SoThat's change my life thought and let me think in a new way.
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  1. ZurobJanuary 19, 2014 at 9:14 PM

    Hi Jawaher, unfortunately there are 7 errors in verbs here.
    The first is a wrong tense choice, the second is SVA, the third a wrong tense choice, the fourth a missing verb, the fifth is a use of passive (be+pp) which should be active and the sixth is SVA. The last one is a missing ed on a verb. Try to fix these if you can. Current grade=50%

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  2. ZurobJanuary 21, 2014 at 9:32 PM

    I have met
    which makes me
    when I started studying
    she is also a student
    I always wanted
    she always tells me
    that's changed

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