Saturday, January 18, 2014

My best friend

I met many people in my life ,but she attracted my attention by her kindness. She is my best friend. Her name is Fakhra. I like to talk to her, listen to her, laugh with her and do everything with her. Moreover, she understands me ,and I trust her. Also, she studies at Zayed university with me ,and she always encourages me to study and do all my best. In addition, my family know her family and we always visit each other. Finally, she is with me in my happy and bad moments and I will stay with her forever.  
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  1. ZurobJanuary 19, 2014 at 9:35 PM

    Good try Fatima but there are 5 errors you need to fix. The first is using a form of the verb "be" with another verb. Then 2 SVA errors and then another "be" problem. After that there is another SVA error. Can you fix them? Current grade= 50%

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  2. ZurobJanuary 21, 2014 at 9:28 PM

    Well done. +15%

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