I will write about important things we should know it. Ti is about things or ways in university to improve my skills or my greeds. There are many ways I can find at ZU to improve my greeds.Firstly, if I focus with my teacher in class,I will understand so that make my greeds improve.Also when I have any question about the lessons my teacher can help me and he answer my question. The important thing I do with my teacher the practice same the exams it is improve my greeds. Secondly, when I practice grammar, vocabulary and writing this make my greeds increase. In addition, when I read the stories in the library this is good thing to improve my reading skill. Finally, when I study with my friends we encourage each other.All of all you should know what things can improve your greeds. You should support your skills by practice and other ways.
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The error : In addition, when I read the stories in the library this is good thing to improve my reading skill.
The correct : For example, when I read the stories in the library this is good thing to improve my reading skill.
One error in connector usage- one connector needs punctuation. Current grade =90%
ReplyDeleteSorry, the problem is with also - it needs to be " .Also, "
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