Tourism is one of the most important industries in the word. Many countries depend on their income from this sector. Tourism has both advantage and disadvantage and I will talk about the both side in my essay.
Firstly, the advantage of attract people in some countries is environmental benefit . For example, when governments take caring about cleaning country they will encourage tourists to visit their country because they protect their environment .Moreover, Tourism can be helpful to the culture For instance, when Tourists visits countries they learned their culture and traditions so they discover new views on society . On the other hand, tourism can affect in country's cultures for examples , some tourists they didn't obligate the law of the visitor country such as , clothing ,speaking, eating so they breaking the rules because of this bad point tourisms should be aware the other cultures.
In my opinion , I see tourism is big fortune for the country ,As we know Dubai will hosting EXPO2020 so it will be huge income in our country because they will be more than 25 millions visitor so we have to try hard to work together to make our country in first class of other countries.
Good writing but two errors in punctuation in connectors- they need full stops before them and commas after them. Can you find them?
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