Saturday, November 23, 2013

During this weekend I spent my time with my family we went to albdaayer to ride bikes to enjoy this awsome weather , thank god no one got hurt in this trip but we really enjoined ridding bikes . after that trip I went to my best friend's house cause I don't see her lately cause she's studying in sharks universty .we went shopping in marina mall we had fun there . And now ism planing to make little surprise for my two twins sisters cause it's their birthday tomorrow it can't imagen how did they grow up this fast . 

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  2. Hi Shamma,
    This is short so you will lose 20%. There are 5 run -ons so you score 50-20=30%
    Try to fix the run-ons by Tuesday 8am and you can gain some marks.

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