Last weekend I spent a wonderful time with my lovely friends at the beach. It was such an amazing day with lovely activity. Such as, wolking along the beach, did BBQ, and running rice. Becuse of the effort I felt I lost a kilo. It was really a funny day with many
adventures. When the sun started setting we set near the beach and looking to the sky. It was a very comfortable felt. After ward, we went to marrena mall to took a cup of coffe and relaxed.however, I felt very tierd and sleepy they wanted shopping. I apologized and rode the car to home. When I back to home I was a happy and very tierd. After that I spent one hour with my
parents took and ate our dinner.finaly, I went to took a shower and wrote a small summary about our trip and went to bed.
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Hi Asma, this will be marked on singular/plural. There are 2 errors in singular/plural so you should score 80% but due to lateness I will deduct 5% from your grade. score is now 75%
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