My best friend

I have a best friend. Her name is Maryam, but I call her Maryoom. I have known Maryam for 7 years. The first time I met her was at school in grade 8 and she was in my class. However, the first time I met her, I was hate her and she was hate me too. My friend Maryam and I are in a same age. She born in 19th of March but I born in 12th February. Maryam is very  talented. She draws very well and I like her paintings. Furthermore, she is interested in Japanese culture and she wants to travel there. In addition, she can speak Japanese language but now she wants to learn Russian language. However, I want to learn French language I just have learned a few French words.  My best friend Maryam lives in Abu Dhabi. Also, she is a student at Zayed university. She likes reading novels and watches movies. She is very close to me and I love her because she is honest, polite and cultured. She told me today Mr Robert did for her the speaking IELTS exam last year and she got a high score in IELTS. I hope to be her friend for ever.

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-  I think The error is : However, I want to learn French language I just have learned a few French words.

- The correct is : However, I want to learn French language and I just have learned a few French words.