There are many people who aren't educated in this world. Those people have a different reasons which stop them to learn. Some of those people live in poor country . More over, this country need a lot of help not just for education . For example, Somalia is a poor country in Africa . Somalia doesn't have any material support . They don't have school, teacher, money and many things ales. However, some if people can learn and have a lot of care in their country but they are fools . They don't want to study they prefer dependent on others. In addition, there are people want to learn but the school far way from their town so it is hard for them to go for the school daily . Further more, some country their students have to pay money to learn and they are poor so they work in early age. All in all, these are some reason but I think there are more and more .
*The error are : a - reason
The correct are : without (a) - reasons
Hi Khadija, there are 2 singular/plural errors- 80%but try to fix them by Tuesday and you'll get a higher mark.
ReplyDeleteWell done. You found the errors- your score is now 86%
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